What do you say?

Hello friends!

I like you to tell me what you feel about this poem, Gift a smile. It is the first poem ever that Nikita Kashyap has written. I encouraged her to write this poem and it looks like she did it just to make me happy. She says her boyfriend helped her too.

I find it a great poem for a beginner. Kamal of Boundlessblessings blog considers it a very great poem too. We can draw some lessons from this can’t we? Nikita could go on to become a great poet.

I like you to tell me what you think of this poem and what lessons you draw from this. Any word of encouragement to the beginning poet?